Life on Line – PART SEVEN

Previous: PART SIX

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Second floor. Bathroom.

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Enna was busy mixing “stuffs”.

“This cream is for whitening. I think I'll add a small amount.”, Enna thought as she adds some cream into their so-called beauty formula.

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Ground floor.

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The sound of footsteps from the kitchen heading towards the stairs was heard together with the sound of someone breathing deeply.
The footsteps were slow but heavy.

Basing on the sound, the man reached the second floor and stopped.

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The man looked around.
He seemed to be undecided to where he should go.

Meanwhile in the bathroom, Enna accidentally dropped a bottle of liquid.
The bottle broke with a loud crashing sound.

Aya and Tina at the roof top stopped their conversation.
Lee at the entertainment room stopped playing.

“What was that?”, Aying from the other room asked Mariz.

“Sorry guys! That was me. I dropped something. I'm fine.”, shouted Enna from the bathroom.

“Answered?”, Mariz said to Aying as she continues with her online activities.

Hearing Enna, Lee continued playing his music piece in the entertainment room, while Aya and Tina continued their conversation.

The man slowly walked towards the direction where Enna’s voice is coming from.

His footsteps are still heavy and his breathing becomes deeper and louder.

The passageway leading to the bathroom is a little darker.

The bathroom door was nearly closed so he could see the light coming from the inside.

Enna was washing her hands with soap when she sensed that someone is outside of the bathroom.

“Ney?”, she called softly as she slowly pulled the door open.

There was no one there.

She turned back to get the mixture she was making.

Suddenly, from the shadows, the man appeared behind her.

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Roof top.

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“Tina, I think you better check out on Enna.”, Aya said.
“Make sure she’s okay.”

“Okay.”, Tina answered as she stood up.

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Second floor. Bathroom.

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The man was slowly approaching Enna.

Enna sensed someone is behind her.

As she turned to face who it was, the man quickly took hold of her head and banged it against the wall.

Enna was dropped unconscious to the floor.

Gasp!
Tina saw what happened.
She was shocked.. so shocked that she was just there standing still, dumbfounded.

As the man turned around, her instincts tell her to get away as soon as possible.

She ran through the passageway and down the stairs.

Fearing the man might get her, she looked back to make sure he is not getting any closer.

She accidentally tripped and came falling down the stairs.

Tina lied unconscious.

Her Nemo stuffie rolled away from her hands.

Moments later, someone picked up the Nemo stuffie.

It was the man.

-- END OF PART SEVEN --

Author’s Note: I AM TRULY SORRY for the suuuuuper delayed continuation of this story.
Firstly, I kind of became busy with my “night hang-outs”. Secondly, I was so pissed off about this Cyber Crime Law so I kind of lack interest in anything. Loljk. Thirdly, internet connection not that cooperative. Lastly, my beloved lappie’s broken D: or so I thought. I wasn’t able to use it for like a week! OH MY GOSH! ONE WHOLE WEEK! But I would like to thank my friend for helping me with my lappie problem! YOOHOO! If you’re reading this, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
Anyways.. I kind of think this part here is rushed or something like that. Well, it’s not really rushed  (since I already have this in my DRAFTS folder for how many weeks now). It just appears to be rushed because.. Honestly, I really don’t know how to make this all “thriller”-looking or stuff. However, with your creative minds, I think you could imagine something out from our little thriller-story and could actually make it a little “thrillier” in your part. Nya nya~

God bless us all.

Posted on 12:01 AM by ayisharu and filed under | 3 Comments »

3 feedbacks:

tina2007 said... @ February 20, 2013 at 2:22 PM

nindot pgka-state akong scene..hahaha.. The most clumsy scence

ayisharu said... @ February 26, 2013 at 3:04 PM

ang pinaka`shunga nga scene kai wa xa hilabti, naligid lng cya ug iya hahhahahahahhaah

tina2007 said... @ April 15, 2013 at 3:49 PM

ning ana ka dramatic akong pgkamatay ngari..hahaha

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